575 verse - syllables
Historically, I've always messed about with posting often daft 575 verses on my many blogs. I have managed to protect you from the silliness of these efforts in my latest incarnation here.
Well, today that ends.
Sorry.
I also tend to post an explanation, showing that I know the difference between haiku and senryu – and why my verses are neither – on my first 575 verse post, which explains why I call them 575 verses and not haiku or senryu.
This is not just an attempt to appear intelligent and highbrow, but to be correct.
Why I feel I have to be correct about this one point when the rest of my output is factually all over the place is a mystery.
Really I should just bite the bullet and call these stupid things haiku like everyone else does, but my brain is fully aware that they're not really, so that is enough to prevent me from doing that.
Stupid brain.
So I am aware of the most common form of these verses being encompassed by the name haiku these days, but I know the traditional haiku form isn't strictly just three lines with 5-7-5 syllables.
Traditional haiku favour an observation about nature and seasonality as its subject matter. Senryu tends to be about human nature, often with a funny or ironic twist.
Neither have to be three lines, and it doesn't have to follow the syllable 'rules'.
I didn't think I was capable of pedantry, but I think what is happening is that I need a rule to be there... so I can subvert it and otherwise muck about within it.
Perhaps just strange brain, not stupid.
The rules I make up for a 575 post is that there must be three lines in the syllable format 5-7-5.
I find it actually quite fun to work within the restrictions of a 575 verse.
But they're not haiku really.
finding yourself short?
extend the syllable count
haikukukuku
post link for sharing: https://skryblans.com/575-verse-syllables
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